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用心看世界,才能写出震撼人心好文章

2017-08-18 05:36:19   中国青年网

新少年作文大赛进入到第十二周,好作品层出不穷,这让担任本期评委的袁劲梅老师一直感叹“难以取舍”。袁老师是杭州学军小学的语文老师,十分认真负责,对于每一位参赛选手的作品,都仔细看过。所有作品选出后,袁老师还给每篇文章都写了长长的评语,既点出了文章哪里好,又指出哪些地方还需要改进,让人感动。

“写文章就是记录生活、传情达意,尤其是散文,文情真切内容充实是首要的,再者是语句通不通顺,立意是否高远,文辞漂亮再次之。写文章还是在强烈表现生活、表达自己的欲望,它帮助我们凿开自己的内心,它让我们思考成长,让我们关注自我,关注生活。只有用心去看世界,才能写出震撼人心的好文章。”袁老师说。

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《沉默是岁月的镜头》

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