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专家建议:让思维更开阔些
2017-09-05 04:26:48 中国青年网
4天来,由封面新闻主办、华西都市报联合主办的“封面新闻杯”中小学生真性情作文大赛受到了社会广泛的关注,组委会也不断收到来自西昌、
成都、雅安、绵阳等四川各地中小学生的踊跃的投稿。
近几天的来稿中,自然景观和校园生活成为同学们创作的主打,在此,专家评审、中国作协会员、担任过多个作文大赛评委的老师罗铖建议,“真性情”作文大赛与考试命题作文不同,大家尽可以把眼界和思维放开阔些,身边的人事物、所见所闻所感都可以入题。
自9月4日开始,封面新闻APP已经开始上载审核通过的投稿作品,在此,组委会提醒参赛者,由于后台投稿众多,为便于审核通过,请同学们在投稿时务必填写准确的城市、学校、班级,同时注意投稿次数要求,一篇文章只能投一次,一稿多投将不会被审核通过。
同题竞笔
自然景物成为最爱
据4日不完全统计,“封面新闻杯”作文大赛专题页面已收到超过600篇作品,其中成都实验外国语学校、成都市实验小学学生投稿最多。同学们的视野从军训有感到学校生活,从闺蜜友情到小伙伴的“秘密基地”,从古镇游记到路边风景……为我们展示了一个五光十色、朝气蓬勃的00后青春世界。
众多来稿中,大自然景物成为中小学生最爱。风、雨、夕阳、月亮都成为大家笔下喜爱的主体。关于“雨”,有人写春天的雨,有人写秋天的雨,还有人写古典诗歌中的雨;情感细腻,观察细致。而课堂上飞进来的蝴蝶、校园里的泡桐树、我的老师也成为同学们作文的一大同题。
评委建议
思维可以天马行空
“学生的语言功底扎实,也具备一定的写作技巧,情绪的流动和转化也自然贴切,情感颇有些细腻之处。”评委罗铖建议,因为“真性情”作文大赛有别于命题作文,所以同学们的思维可以天马行空,“写得开阔些,开阔的视野一定根植于生活的体验、敏锐的观察和独特的视角,文章总体上都有课堂作文程式化的特点,略显拘谨,我非常赞同著名作家蒋蓝先生的说法,“观察、呈现事物的细节,并表达真情实感。”只有不断细腻的观察和独特的视角,才能积累自我独特的素材,形成自我独特的写作风格。”
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